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Autistic Artistry
larrylark

Is art close to your heart?
 1
Michealangelo kept it close to his.
 2
As well as in his head,his hands, his mind.
 3
Its said he talked of little else
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but mainly to himself.
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An emminant man has even said
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there can be times when art and autism overlap.
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Take a check list,pen a map
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of his pecadillos
 9
watch him draw on his cigarillo
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as he smoothly brushes the cracks in his roof.
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Was he a loner? Mark yes
 12
Token line in conversation
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that got less and less over the years?
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There is proof.
 15
Testy,self absorbed aloof
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to the core of his being?
 17
Tick that box.
 18
Intense desire to control,pull the strings?
 19
Highly functioning,few friends,
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endlessly singing the same tune?
 21
No headroom for emotion.?
 22
Is this what he really grappled with?
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Ash from his cheroot floating roof to floor
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inside the Sistine Chapel.
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Whitewash flaking from his bathroom ceiling.
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3 Jul 04

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ah, i love this :)

there are things you could change, but i don't know what
 — Ananke

my girlfriend's son is autistic...
well done
 — chuckles

Thank you for writing this.
 — jenakajoffer

Dear jenakajoffer,

The pleasure was all mine and I'm so glad someone likes one of my favourite Larry poems.

Larry asperger Lark
 — larrylark

Dear Larry,

I wondered why someone would write on this subject matter unless is was directly personal, like why I write about my son (not asperger's but high-func autism).
I'll thank you again, this is wonderful.  I hope I can write like this one day.

Jen-
 — jenakajoffer

oh my gosh
 — MsNewBooty

excellento!
L 6 - did you mean 'eminent'.
L 9 - peccadillos

I see the lack of space before commas is a deliberate attempt to relate it to artistry.
It bothers me to some extent even the period before the question mark in L 22.
Or may be the old larry wasnt on prescriptions then :)

The content and  the style is smells original.
Lovely end too.
 — trochee

The content and  the style smells original.    grrrrrr...
 — trochee

Dear Trochee

you might have noticed the care I take in Perfuming my poems.

Larry ode du Toilet Lark
 — larrylark

Yea boy.
though you havent considered the changes in L 6 and L 9.
am i right? :-)

Larry myopic lark.
 — trochee

Larry, this poem is so perfect.
I'm happy and touched again, to be reading this.
 — jenakajoffer

this is so nice.
thanks, poet.
: )
 — fractalcore

i see why many like this, do i dare say it is touching? well, yes, but not in any melodramatic way of course.

i like this. has some really good lines, righting is lucid, content itself smooth and hopeful, encouraging.

-- a friend that listens too much.
 — unknown

Hi unknown

you have my ear

Larry Noddy Lark
 — larrylark

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