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Meeting in Passau
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3 rivers meet in passing;
 1
they sit, drink black coffee,
 2
converse in low voices, watching
 3
the people in the beer garden,
 4
 
 
smile at each other's jokes.
 5
They stay the night,
 6
wash laundry in the sink;
 7
 
 
they kiss blessings onto
 8
each other's cheeks, note
 9
what's to come,
 10
how they'll change on arrival
 11
 
 
– really,
 12
they are already there –
 13
 
 
and continue course.
 14
The people in the beer garden
 15
still sit, watched by 3 rivers
 16
who currently meet in passing.
 17

5 Jan 18


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The poem is extremely beautifully composed. But I believe assignment writing would be very helpful in refining your already honed talent of poetry.
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