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there's been a roll-over on 9W
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I suppose it takes time
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passing, I suppose it
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takes snow falling
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inside windows, a blizzard
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by my bedside
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I suppose it takes not
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one but two to say
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"don't go that way"
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and an ear beaten
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bloody to listen
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You never feel trapped
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until you're asked
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to move; find you can't
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"the car's leaking gasoline"
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as if I can't smell it
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It's OK, it's cold, it'll
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take an effort to go get help;
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you don't listen, your hand
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stuck to glass chasing
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your skin's warmth
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you should leave
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before the sun goes down,
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and anyway I'll be here
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for a while longer.
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8 Jan 18


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