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Your smile
Idontknow014

The worst moment of my life

As I watched the love of my of my life
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His jet black hair
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The same colour as his soul
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Soon I would come to know
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His enchanting sea green eyes
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That would never show the lies
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Them cotton soft lips
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I just could never resist
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The thought of it now just makes me feel sick
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Butterflies exploding in my head
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My heart
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My stomach
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Now shattered in the pit of my soul
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Memories of the laughter
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The love we both shared
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The fun little debates
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And play fights if we dared
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It still makes me smile reminiscing
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That is before the acid starts rising
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Reminding me of what you were dismissing
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While I was living my life on clouds and unicorns
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You were more concerned about watching your certain type of porn
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I was next door drinking wine
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While taking my relaxing baths
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Having my early night's
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You waited for these times
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You was a person I never thought you were
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A sadistic prick
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That doesn't deserve a dick
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I now see through your creepy smile
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You've made my life hell
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You worthless fucking paedophile
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23 Jan 18


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Hard hitting and poignant. I feel for you if this has been your own experience
 — larrylark

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