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winter
cadmium

i was wondering about
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avalanches giving and
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emptying,
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like a father who is
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not, like a rain
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that dries heaven.
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maybe i see that
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chidren aren't cattle.
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read that, that
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i'm a dad too,
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and it didn't matter.
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maybe my wondering isn't like
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wishing, like a dream might
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make fathers;
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like a snow makes
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white rainbows.
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24 Apr 18


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I was wondering about a cheeseburger,before and after, I read your story.  A rain that dries heaven like it is wet in the first place.. plz elaborate.  how are children not cattle?  does work need to be done by minors?
 — percocet

can kids just sit and smoke pot until they're 18?
 — percocet

like a fool makes a follower
 — percocet

are you naturally stupid, or is this an act so's you don't get beat up in school...? hows that working out?
 — cadmium

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