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pocket verse nummer one
cadmium

some men are
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beautiful
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spirit amd motion,
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smart...
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they could of shown
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us the new sacre,
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instead of dollar dancing
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for the NBA.
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this lite verse... prose with arty moves. it's not poetry, it's just ha-ha lite.

a poem is a self expanding phrase. this is a self contracting put down.

4 Jun 18

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obscure spirit and motion doesnt go
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it's a poet trip. you need imagination and verbal ability to get it. no need to explain this to you. it'd still be worthless to your needs.
 — cadmium

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