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l am winter
you are the Sunlight .
I am pale skin
i murmur low.
You are olive skinned
with a glow.

6 Jun 18

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good one Cadmium
 — unknown

read much? this isn't mine and i don't even want to comment on it because it's such a private poem.

i really hate one-move players. they stand there looking like a complete idiot while saying this powerful thought that came to them without having to think it. i only post under my own periodic table designation. cadmium does not rust.

now i'll give RG a ten just because you crapped up his space.
 — cadmium

Woah capatilisation! Fir the record I am pale and sometimes tan
 — DeformedLion