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What the crow didn't say
Haxxen

Written for J because she made me remember.

It came early.
 1
Took me away from my lover's tent.
 2
Made me follow in canoe to a gash in the trees rent by lightning.
 3
 
 
Beckoned me to step inside
 4
But I was not ready.
 5
 
 
Canoed back to she who slept in nothing and leather
 6
And as a reminder of choice and fate
 7
my fig fawn left a black feather.
 8

2 Jul 18

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the crow didnt help
 — unknown

aw, nice. :)

you know that 'trees rent by lightning' move you got there is super cool.
very nice crow poem.
 — jenakajoffer

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