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One day
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The wind will change
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That’s what dad used to say
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When I use to pull a face
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Or argue with my eyebrows crossed
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And now that’s what I will say to you
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With the tears and the sad face
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Don’t live your life in the past
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Things will move and emotions change
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Don’t drag your feet in the rain
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Focus on the future
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It's intangible and moldable
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Like soft clay between your fingers
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It only sets when you want it to
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7 Jul 18

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Wonderful  poem  so many truisms
 — Rossant

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