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at 83 i still take a pill at lunch he confessed
just in case flies swarm and attack my sandwich
         with the same fanaticism  
                 they devoured
                  a regiment
                  of corpses.

12 Jul 18

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what pill are you taking is it for stress management. Great flow on this poem
 — Rossant

 — cadmium

thanks for bumping this mike, what a great poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Why great?
 — unknown

great because it is in the Starr style
 — unknown

Short but sweet
 — rivergood

nam  este
 — unknown