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i am your tied
cadmium

i am your tied,
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you are water, you are my tide.
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the ocean is a great bowl of
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love, coming and going. many hopes.
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fish play;
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codfish and rope.
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6 Aug 18

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this is a pound poem, informed by beat and punk writing, but transformed as post-modern. the rhyme, the rhythms -- more out of Yeats than Pound or Corso -- make this a pastiche verse thing with only a heart and no pedigree beyond dog.
 — cadmium

L 1 i am your strandled you are water, you are my tide
 — unknown

naw, the physical in this is in the form. if i were going to write a sex poem, it wouldn't be an arty one.
 — cadmium

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