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Happenstance
Rossant

I ventured far and wide
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for a staff of truth ,
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withstanding swirling deserts
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and beyond
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naked serphants roamed
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through my pass
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to a land we call Xanandu
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and stand in oasis's of seprendity
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31 Aug 18

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A meaningful poem
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Enjoyed reading this
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Great little poem try changing the destination to other places these 2 are very cliche'

Xanandu,
seprendity
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Thanks Unknown
 — Rossant

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