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was it a bull head or a chihuahua?
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When it happens you’ll know
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There won’t be any uterine metaphors
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or small animals
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There will only be us.
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I’ll give you everything
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and you can do anything
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Telepathy not required
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I’ll tell you what I want
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It won’t be quiet and it won’t be gentle
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You’ve made me beg and I’ll make you pay
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And yes, I will moan
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And tremble
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And sweat
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And you’ll stop making jokes
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12 Sep 18

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Enjoyed this; still pondering parts, but I think I get the gist, last line worked for me.
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Hurricane flo has hit the shores.  The stormy surge was 16 feet.  No joke.
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Was a crime committed? PETA wants to know.
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I think the title is too vague, but this seems well captured otherwise.
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