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Hit and Run
unknown

Forbidden to kiss.
 1
Forbidden to touch.
 2
road signs were vandalized
 3
or were they ignored?
 4
 
 
eyes plotting behind glasses
 5
your elbow colliding with mine
 6
an unexpected curve
 7
limbs suddenly entwined.
 8
 
 
the police report noted
 9
a multi party accident
 10
no mention of the cause:
 11
 
 
your fingers fondling
 12
the vertebral ridges
 13
of my car keys.
 14

12 Sep 18

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last line is a killer  i can feel the sexual tension
 — unknown

I like what you added. I can feel the collision.
 — Seventeen

maybe change to “limbs instantly entwined” ?
 — Seventeen

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