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anxiety
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Little boy,
 1
you come by it honestly
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We bunker in bathrooms
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at work, at school
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Tremble through tears
 5
My mistakes
 6
Your fears
 7
 
 
Puncture my palms
 8
with tiny pink nails
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Shake your head
 10
and twist my wrist
 11
Just as I predicted
 12
 
 
Truth no one wants to hear
 13
Better to chastise than listen
 14
I’m fed delusions of
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defying genetics
 16
or hoping for the best
 17
 
 
My breath
 18
my blood
 19
I would kill for you
 20
 
 
My dimpled prince
 21
I wish you
 22
could have been spared
 23
this twisted fate
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20 Sep 18

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nice cascade of thoughts and feelings. nice wording -- sadly, the hurt is so real. we only get to write a poem so direct and real once or twice in life. thank god.

such good images, so heart touching. such true images of what it's like, how it's got to be said. i wish you the best resolution in this. must say though, that the only real solution is to keep writing and making things which are yours and nobody can take from you. like they take your heart.
 — cadmium

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