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flour
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they gave us a card
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with your name
 2
dates of entry and exit
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a certified box
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with your remains.
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within which
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a transparent
 7
plastic bag now
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preserves you.
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your glasses, dentures,
 10
toothbrush refuse
 11
to disappear
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rude squatters
 13
who have seized  
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your bedroom.
 15
 
 
tomorrow i will
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drive to the sea
 17
to disperse you
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amongst quarreling waves
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a halo of flowers
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fading memories
 21
and quivering lips.
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but today
 23
my hands cannot help
 24
from rediscovering you
 25
in a bag of flour.
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22 Sep 18

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Haunting but the ending is so surprising
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Ashes to flowers play on flour
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this is perfect
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