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Out Of Focus
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Wasp on my windscreen,
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half dead as Autumn dreams towards winter
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Over the road, old lady, fraught,
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wished she could have caught bus gone by,
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issues a despairing sigh.
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Adjust lens. Out of focus,
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No hocus pocus, I want clarity,
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a perfect marriage of random connections caught,
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with wasp seeming to float between camera and her.
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I take care with the settings, then look up,
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but they won’t act in my charade, I’m shunned.
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Old woman has walked out of view.
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Wasp is neither near or far,
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crushed beneath wheel of a passing car.
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9 Oct 18

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