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invasion of privacy
unknown

In the security
 1
of your embrace
 2
you kiss my neck
 3
whisper in my ear
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how I am yours
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forever
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that you will always defend me
 7
never let go
 8
I shut my eyes
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bite my lips
 10
and slowly inhale
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your cologne
 12
to prolong the fantasy
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to indemnify
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or insulate
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block the invisible
 16
first touch
 17
of  death’s  
 18
insidious
 19
noose.
 20






Lover I’m not yours.
I was born a tardy corpse;
Death penetrated me first
and stole my virginity
not you.

27 Oct 18

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 — unknown

Floored. But not necessarily in a good way. It's well-written, but I don't think this reads well to the single-crowd, or worse yet, anyone that's actually lost a SI to the great beyond. 9 on literary-prowess only
 — unknown

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