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fathom wonders often
vida

reach me, ye majesty
 1
full of empty wonders
 2
part to smite upon a symphony
 3
some part to light, brilliantly
 4
teach these dangling words discovered...
 5
in awe these lips no longer mutter
 6
if far away the dark lone chaos
 7
swirling I remain a pure forgotten
 8
ye pierce this madness; fathom wonders often
 9
reach me to this death I've pondered
 10

3 Nov 18

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melikes a lot.  although in 8, I'm thinking 'fiction' as opposed to "forgotten".  at the same time, "forgotten" might work better there sonically.  hmmm...overall, kick ass.
 — JKWeb

Thanks JKWeb you're the best!
 — vida

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