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mix slowly and stir well before drinking
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Lover
 1
your skin resembles
 2
antarctica
 3
and those nipples
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bush
 5
forbidden fruit.
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When you die
 7
i will steal your ashes
 8
add ice
 9
overdose on
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pomegranate seeds
 11
a melon slice
 12
and milk.
 13




we are what we eat.
don't forget to read the nutrition label.

5 Nov 18

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LOVE this!  I often use food references in my love poems.  You do it really well. Glad to see that the dreaded spammer hasn't gotten to this poem yet.  F*CKERS!
 — aforbing

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