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unclear message from Perla
unknown

the sheets rumbling like waves
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ocean under a comforter
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to and fro rocking my sleep undisturbed
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rapid eye movement across blinds
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watching from windows as you come back
 5
walking pacific dreads on dragon slippers
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while clear on hand those red shoes
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Perla says you left your phone on the beach
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only vastness at play you message on dreams
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our soft pillow fights like swordfish
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making love a cover to unmade bed where consciosness hides
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you wake up late in the alarm of fire
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10 Nov 18

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mysterious...
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