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loyalty
unknown

you kiss me
 1
bite my tongue
 2
hold me tight
 3
whisper i am yours
 4
forever
 5
but i am
 6
not your faithful angel
 7
and you are not
 8
the first
 9
i have touched
 10
for i have been
 11
molested by death
 12
made a hostage of time
 13
lied to you
 14
forgiven my crimes
 15
so naive lover
 16
go fondle yourself
 17
take your
 18
tongue out
 19
and flee
 20
i am only loyal to myself
 21
enslaved to those
 22
who hurt me
 23

24 Nov 18

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what's mine is yourn and what's yourn is mine as well
 — aforbing

u r not worthwhile
 — percocet

u hurt u
 — percocet

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