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diary of a maid
unknown

i found evidence of invisible crimes
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scratches on the head board
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the furniture had been abruptly moved
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footprints scaled the walls
 4
even the pillows looked abused
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a broken strap
 6
lone sock
 7
foreign hairs
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lost in entangled sheets
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which when separated and folded
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exposed me
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to waves of trapped heat.
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27 Nov 18

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  You know what's just as worse as being a house maid? Being a Hotel maid : ) . Good Poem
 — CheBourdain7

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