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DeformedLion

i want to be in the room where the potato chips are
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nouns like idaho and verbs like france.
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petroleum is an old word for poem, this is the think
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and the idol
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she is--
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kissin with beethoven and his lolly heart...
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thirsty, they always say wine
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they say it fast, when they want to pronounce
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I THINK i still love her
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its a shrill sound in my memory    a baked clean
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salted drivel sodden
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well i cant drive to here can i ???
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i can just kind of idle
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with the microphone like
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blue ocean
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rustle of my tongue and the plastic in my fattening hands
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oh i wants
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3 Dec 18


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