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wamen
percocet

a women steals my heart,
 1
and she runs,
 2
 
 
I do not chase her,
 3
 
 
I go to work.
 4
 
 
 
 
I work for years without my heart
 5
She runs around holding my heart.
 6
 
 
 
 
I continue my skill
 7
 
 
she hates that I haven't spent
 8
all of my time chasing her.
 9
 
 
 
 
I leave my heart for value,
 10
and she calls me a bitch.
 11
 
 
I tell her, " I still love you."
 12
She dances around with my heart
 13
I tell her, " I care for you,"
 14
She throws my heart to the dogs.
 15
 
 
I hate her,
 16
she begins to love me.
 17
 
 
she is death to me,
 18
 
 
And I just found out she
 19
 
 
is a he.
 20
 
 
I spent ten grand on a child
 21
I cannot create.
 22
 
 
plz love me
 23
 
 
or don't.
 24
 
 
so long as we can fuck me
 25
 
 
society will work.
 26
 
 
i'ma try to fuck you,
 27
instead of me.
 28
 
 
if u r dumb as fuck u will get got.
 29
 
 
so I have no sympathy
 30
because everyone knows.\
 31
 
 
 
 
everyone knows,
 32
 
 
u know, I know, we all know.
 33
 
 
 
 
fuck that up
 34
 
 
I am not angry
 35
 
 
 
 
u fuck that up.
 36

8 Dec 18


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I clicked on the make changes button and nothing happened.
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or I will not fuck you.
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i'm hangry and I just got a deal
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deal to the death of descent
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fools
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