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More Than This
larrylark

There's always something
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slightly more substantial than nothing.
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Fluff inside the tip of a glove.
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Thread loosened from a scarf.
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Dust blown off a shovel of ash.
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Cat that paws inside a window pane,
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in vain attempt to claim Autumn leaves.
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Fragment framed by seconds, beckons time away.
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10 Dec 18

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