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A muse, a musician, a musical instrument
Roc1Knight

After watching a picture of a beautiful nude woman.

Over my windows there is a spot
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full of light, wisdom and genius.
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Whenever I look out or think of it,
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great or novel vision goes into my eyes.
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Now I walk near this place. What I see?
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A Godness is dancing, and her charm, and the tempting flesh.
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My heart beats as her drum when realized.
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And so is the pulse of my temples, her cymbals.
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She begins with a sigh like the wind puffs her long hair.
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Her toes are nearly touching the ground, so dance with my never ending lust.
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As her butt goes down and down, that melody also becomes slower and slower.
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Until the legs spread wide open, entering the true movement of the music.
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A hand of her moves like a touch from the void.
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It comes cross the chest. Two soft but delicate tune.
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Then sweeps though the abdomen, there stays the gentle jazz.
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At last, fingers rub the low strings. The soprano opens her lips, and begins the solo.
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Over her body there is a spot
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full of emotion, beauty, and happiness.
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Whenever she plays or just showes off it,
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beautiful or touching music comes in and out of my heart......
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14 Dec 18

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Awesome poem very an enjoyable read
 — Rossant

I'm glad you like it, Rossant.
 — Roc1Knight

no... no over my windows.
 — percocet

over your life adventure ok
 — percocet

sounds like you are waiting for kingdom hearts 3 as well
 — percocet

"so is the pulse of my temple."
 — percocet

u will have many kids and they will all be retarded
 — percocet

a hand of her touched the void that is me.
 — percocet

u dismissed it
 — percocet

I don't get it, percocet. And sorry, haven't heard kingdom hearts 3 until now.
 — Roc1Knight

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