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apology
DeformedLion

i am so sorry but my tongue is a pencil and it
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br
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  ok   e
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and fingers are too sausage  
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on my android cock shocker.   ;
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                                                 ^
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                                                    is that enuff?
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sometimes you remind me of a haircut that
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brushed away my sadness, clipper teeth and heat.
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sometimes it’s enough that i’m a poodle and
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i can make you smile in a bar,
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  a word like a drink, orgasm o’ repeat.
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one time there was carp and it beneath
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your heart, stench bonnet, belch comet
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come halley with bitch ya-ya’s  
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i’d fuck you like a soft serve, i’d melt all over the
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room and you’d be “eh, over so soon?”
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back to carp:  the ancestral, a steaming bitch lasagna
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                        in a pond  with
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                        the australian summer,
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                        im sweating
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                        my balls are snowflakes nuzzled
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                        into your butterfly.
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           i’d come inside myself so i didn’t have to apology.
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           i’d make you raise my children
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           so that they could be better poems
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           so that i could be with you.
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;
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i want to slobber on your lobster
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    puke on you,
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if you had a sorry bone i'd be rubbing
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raw- bisque city, i'd meme you
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till the internet
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forgot me/made me dolly
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i'd harpoon myself and crawl
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   i'd shoot the clouds and
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   shit downwind
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i'd take you to the cinema
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spend more than 40 dollars on ya.
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   sometimes the lobsta
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   would gross, grass, whatever
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   tell you i sneaked into your bedsocks
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   and pillowed my delivery.
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   don;t cry, i;m sorry that  
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   i want your warmth,
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   that i would drown in your bath,
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   my sick, or your indifference.
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im sorry that i me;
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semi, full or cheddar.
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20 Jan 19


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ha! dirty blanket grows a pair but then hides them in the snow. Ifkn love it ❤️😎
 — jenakajoffer

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