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Come on! This is not fair at all. Substance, how about???
How is this different from the three line poems other people write based on one or two puns or wordplays?
I don't understand it, that's what's different. :) I'm too tired to have to figure it out today. Spoon feed me.
Okay, I get it. Just had to read it several times. Now I see that it's really short and tight and darned good.
i dont get it?
Wait a second... "Tight"? The reason it's tight is there's only one part to it. If it was a machine it'd be a wedge. There's no way it could be anything other than tight. Even if it was a really-great four words and a title, it should still be rated far less than a pretty-good poem of thirty or forty lines.
i get it. that is kind of depressing. I understand what you are trying to say though. This is really clever. (8)
I can understand why people don't want to rate this but it's very clever. It takes a lot of imagination to pack a lot into just a few words. Again, it isn't The Great American Novel, it's a cute tiny poem. Maybe we should call it a PO since it's so small. I stand by my 7, not comparing it to anything but itself.
(my) comment is
all of the above.
i give it a one, because you're a fuck hole, and two, it sucks.there
stainedsteal, do you have turet's?
ahh... this is refreshing. (to a girl who studies theology)
Great poem Hank
This should be read at religious gatherings everywhere to those still stupid enough to attend
Larry holy ghost Lark
brilliant. my religion is e) as well.
pretty cool, pretty smart...lol
haha...all of the above...as in "heaven above," right?
At least this is how I understand it.
thank you for this.
I get it! yeah. thanks. good piece....
sky gaze much?