| She Came Out Lacking
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Standing on the edge | 1 |
dawn to her back | 2 |
staring into evening. | 3 |
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The stars in the sky | 4 |
seemed like lost hopes | 5 |
she couldn't even count them | 6 |
anymore. | 7 |
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She could hear her own breathing, | 8 |
the beating of her heart. | 9 |
Time had betrayed her. | 10 |
Left her with gaping holes | 11 |
where dreams had once been. | 12 |
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Long ago, she had weighed her heart | 13 |
and found it lacking | 14 |
in desire | 15 |
and ambition. | 16 |
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What was life | 17 |
without a dream anyway? | 18 |
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15 Aug 04 |
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