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Random Poem:

When Joe debated his book
mhdashraf

I welcome the B ,double O and the K,
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Tyrants  takin' over my room today,
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(book)"Hey Kid, come study! yes? nay?"
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(me)   -Nay? language like that is so passe'
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(book)" I hold your future, don't throw me away"
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(me) -You're trippin', God owns that....okay!!
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(book)"Look at you retreating, hair turning so grey"
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(me)-Tempt me and black ashes you'll stay
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(book)"The brave contemplates the attempted slay!"
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(me)-you want a peice of me, come, make my day
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(book)"A threat on deaf ears by anger is spoken"
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(me) - Consider it a warnin', not a mere token
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(book)"You dare threaten me, when I can break you!"
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(me) - Break is not what I fear, What I fear is the screw
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(book)" The screw? Education wasted, a mind gone to shambles"
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(me)- Ur right, my speech has turned to rambles
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(book) " Lol, brb, abbreviations so many....
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             By teenagers with vocabulary so petty....
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             So sad "I" can't be turned to letters
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             Words I'll remain, The best of the better...."
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(me) - B to the double O, K ur whack
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          I ain't got time for you, so get off my back
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      Chillin' with my homies, what we seek is the slack
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         Wisdom, knowledge is useless crack
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          The light of education to us is black
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           And "you" , you're going back on the rack!!!
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