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Random Poem:

Marika
bobby70

Salve Regina, mater misericordiae:
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vita, dulcedo, et spes nostra, salve.
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(Hail, Holy Queen, Mother of Mercy,
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our Life, our Sweetness, and our Hope.)
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She was new to the land,
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sitting hungry and weak
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Saint Michael’s Sunday Mass,
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nestled under the El.
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Ad te clamamus exsules filii Hevae.
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(To Thee do we cry, poor banished children of Eve.)
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She looked up to Mary
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for some sort of a sign,
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of how her life would be
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in this land of the free.
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Ad te suspiramus, gementes
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et flentes in hac lacrimarum valle.
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(To Thee do we send up our sighs mourning
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and weeping in this valley of tears.)
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She prayed to the statue.  
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It moved and it pointed,
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it smiled and winked its eye.  
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The child fell to the floor.
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Eia, ergo, advocata nostra,
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illos tuos misericordes oculos ad nos converte.
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(Turn then, most gracious Advocate,
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Thine Eyes of Mercy towards us,)
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A strong man lifted her,
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she wasn’t too heavy,
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she’d had no food for days.  
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He took her to the priest.
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Et Iesum, benedictum fructum ventris tui,
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nobis post hoc exsilium ostende.
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(and after this our exile show us the
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Blessed Fruit of thy Womb, Jesus.)
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The child tried to explain,
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tell the priest what happened.  
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The priest gave her breakfast,
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blessed her and sent her home.
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O clemens, O pia, O dulcis Virgo Maria.
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(O clement, O loving, O sweet Virgin Mary.)
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The Virgin picked her out,
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had chosen her for what?  
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Given her a sly wink,
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and she didn’t know why.
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Ora pro nobis, sancta Dei Genetrix.
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Ut digni efficiamur promissionibus Christi.
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(Pray for us O Holy Mother of God
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That we may be made worthy of the promises of Christ.)
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Bobby
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