poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Perhaps the Rain
Isabelle5

will quench my thoughts
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of your fever for another;  
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a girl browner than I,
 3
with lips that make you
 4
ache to feel them against your own
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(even while you show me
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which parts of you
 7
currently need my kiss).
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If she tastes like berries,
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if she brings you Altoids
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in an authentic English tin,
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will you return the favor
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as you do with me?
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You bring me Chinese food,
 14
spicy with peppers, to feel
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the heat when I slide
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my seasoned tongue
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along your turgid skin.
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Remember me if you slip
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blind fingers into wet warmth -
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your eyes once held me
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in a romance-gilded frame,
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when Autumn was fresh,
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when leaves were yet to fall.
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“Don’t worry,” you whisper
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wrapping my legs around your waist,
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your breath warm against my breast
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but please open your eyes -
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I need to know it is my face you see
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when you come so shatteringly
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inside my jealous skin.
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