poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

braille on skin
DeformedLion

tom waits growl
 1
and peacocks settling into
 2
urban sprawl,
 3
i say
 4
 
 
the green bowl with the peanuts in it
 5
festers, and little by little
 6
the air and the salt marry.
 7
 
 
he drinks hairy,
 8
you can see the vomit on knotted tendrils
 9
and like a kite in a vault
 10
you flop
 11
 
 
afterwards,
 12
the rain has settled into mud,
 13
the bones jangle in your throat,
 14
and when you speak
 15
i look for the ribs
 16
 
 
of the children you say you love.
 17
 
 
tom waits is being quiet now,
 18
and the dress i spilled myself
 19
into has moulted,
 20
the threads thrill into my skin
 21
like the worms which want
 22
to swim through my meat.
 23
 
 
and when you dumped me
 24
back into the closet,
 25
i think a piece ripped,
 26
like a little paper hand--
 27
    clings to you.
 28
 
 
brailles over the lies,
 29
like dots connecting,
 30
aching for the throat.
 31

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