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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|this prophet brings destruction|
This silver spoon and golden worship has
left a sour taste in my mouth, I make
sardonic reference to a “modern man” moved
back so far.
If popular thought and simplistic view are
oh so right, then you should retreat back to
a more Earthly tone, and attempt
Pay close attention
as an open door to the
is truly rare
and rarely true.
Now stand back while I close down this
experiment gone awry
I would rather not breathe than
live in a fish bowl, Windex wiped every hour.
You’ll watch the sun fry,
Then go about your business.
I call only for balance.
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