poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Take Me to Another Place(revised)
Sputnik

Take me to another place
 1
Can anywhere be as bad as this?
 2
Colour me washed out,
 3
This world is unyielding stone,
 4
And you’re the worst thing in it.
 5
Save me from yourself.
 6
 
 
Take me to another place
 7
Here isn’t far enough.
 8
Build me a house of jasmine petals
 9
Snow white, sweet as cotton candy.
 10
Confectionary clouds.
 11
Flavour it with rose and chocolate,
 12
So it melts upon my tongue.
 13
 
 
Take me to another place
 14
Where I don’t have to worry
 15
About the way I bleed colour
 16
So that I’m very afraid
 17
wI might be invisible someday.
 18
Paint me a picture
 19
To remember me right now.
 20
 
 
Take me to another place
 21
I can’t stand it here.
 22
You brainwash hate, black as truffles.
 23
Nothing but cruel lies from your mouth.
 24
Can’t you see their stain?
 25
Take me anywhere but here.
 26

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