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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|found words- the killing bat|
the directions from my killing bat:
"TRUCTION OF CHAOLI TYPE MOSQUITO KILLING FAN
Chaoli electric mosquitos rilling bat adopts the newest
techniques in the worid. It uses two um-5 olry batteries to produce power, and with the electronic circuit to change the power into high voltage in the bat(bat there is very small eteclric current in the bat)with which rills mosquitoes. It does not radiate harmfully, and with no poison and bad smell. It is a good hand in rilling mosquiloes at home, and it is safe to use it.
Open the battery box on the end of the handle, put in
two 5# batteries. Hold the handle and keep a finger on the switch, the indicator light on, the bat works. Move the finger off the switch, the indicator light out, no voltage on the wire net.
1. The bat can not be used as a toy for children.
2. Do not often use metal no touch the wire net to cause sport when the bat works.
3. Keep the bat dry, do not be damped, do not use wet towel to wipe the wire net and handle.
4. Clean the body of fly and mosquito on the wire net
often to improve killing result.
Caution: Do not touch the wire net when the bat works."
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