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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Crucifix Cunnilingus
BrokenJoke

Bringing the wooden crucifix
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to her sweet angelic lips,
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whispering secret things
 3
to a God
 4
who without a doubt exists
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between her palms
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shaped as a crucifix.
 7
Kissing it quickly
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for forgiveness
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from sins uncommitted.
 10
She tucks the crucifix
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back beneath her
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pristine blouse,
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from her knees
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she rises and
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her head of
 16
brown curls she bows.
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Leaving the altar
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after an hour
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with pink grazes
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upon her knees.
 21
At the locked Church door
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she meets the parish priest.
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Through her prayerful mouth
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her God the crucifix
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betrays all that is sacred,
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as it lets the
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pervert priest
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rape her soul
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with a crooked
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Catholic kiss.
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Her spirit died
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whilst he fondled
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her barely budded
 34
teenage tits.
 35
Forever feeling guilty
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because momentarily
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she found pleasure in
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crucifix cunnilingus.
 39
He finished the
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sacrament most unholy
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by baptizing her freshly
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molested mind
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with his bloody priest urine.
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Never forgetting how
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she received his
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pulsating cock and
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swallowed his
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demonic cum
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with as much grace
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as when she
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receives and swallows
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Holy Communion.
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