poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

JEKYLL/HYDE
Aziel

i. Anger has made me bitter
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but I don't want to be bitter, I want to be sweet.
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i feel like i'm a monkey
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shitting on a conveyor belt at
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timed intervals
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i'm no longer a fish,
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i don't flip and flop
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now I toss and turn
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ii. you've failed to RSVP to the party in my pants
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iii. i am in love with Jekyll
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because he is the dog and the wolf.
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I PAY TRIBUTE TO A MASK
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the sun on your back/in your eyes
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sometimes,
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on sunny days
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there are still passing moments,
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like clouds
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(overcast and billowing moods)
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i can never tell whether it's the wolf or the dog i'm in the company of--
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these days i know my limits.
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i would never take on a task I couldn't handle.
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If I want something badly enough, I make it work,
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like shoes a size too big
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HYDE/JEKYLL/HYDE
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iv. sleep is for the weak, but i'm 6 days into a "nap"
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tumbling down passages of strange and foreign books,
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grasping for some thing
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{HAND}[m(F)o(O)u(O)t(T)h]
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v.  I might love you.   I love you.   I loved you.
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vi. i hate you on sometimes hours and find myself okay with that when i can't remember your face.
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ct
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or
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y?
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