poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

The First Threshold (Nam)
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I ride along a path passing lifeless vines
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and through phantom mists.
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Ahead a  sign of red, with gold letters saying:
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“All who enter here leave all hope behind.”
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Green ghosts marching or running pass
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chanting tales of heroisms long past.
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Apparitions carrying clubs of metal and wood
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are silhouetted against a moon of glass.
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In the distance I hear a camp bell ring.
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Searching, I see a thousand faces.
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Eyes open wide in fear and admiration
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questioning, is this a hero’s end of things?
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Why had I taken my life
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and chosen death?
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To wise counsel I’d been deaf.
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Was this the time of forever strife?
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A green and beige apparition with a brown halo,
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a squarish of many colors upon its chest,
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a wide belt with a large golden buckle appears.
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And with the voice of a god of war did bellow:
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“Welcome to the Marine Corp Recruit Depot
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Parris Island, South Carolina gentlemen.
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You have 60 seconds to get your asses outside
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and on the yellow foot prints, 15 are already gone.”
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The adventure had begun.
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