poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Crucifix Cunnilingus

Bringing the wooden crucifix
to her sweet angelic lips,
whispering secret things
to a God
who without a doubt exists
between her palms
shaped as a crucifix.
Kissing it quickly
for forgiveness
from sins uncommitted.
She tucks the crucifix
back beneath her
pristine blouse,
from her knees
she rises and
her head of
brown curls she bows.
Leaving the altar
after an hour
with pink grazes
upon her knees.
At the locked Church door
she meets the parish priest.
Through her prayerful mouth
her God the crucifix
betrays all that is sacred,
as it lets the
pervert priest
rape her soul
with a crooked
Catholic kiss.
Her spirit died
whilst he fondled
her barely budded
teenage tits.
Forever feeling guilty
because momentarily
she found pleasure in
crucifix cunnilingus.
He finished the
sacrament most unholy
by baptizing her freshly
molested mind
with his bloody priest urine.
Never forgetting how
she received his
pulsating cock and
swallowed his
demonic cum
with as much grace
as when she
receives and swallows
Holy Communion.

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