poetry critical

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Random Poem:

I might never see you again.
Cloudless

I had another dream about you last night.
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Just thought you might like to know that
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I have more dreams about you now that you're gone
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than I did while we were together.
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I have to remind myself, daily, that its
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not you I want, it's just... someone.
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And when I awake from the slight nightmare
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of my mother telling me- get dressed quick,
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Leigh and June are coming for dinner.
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You and her, coming and, I have nothing to wear.
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You, who broke my heart,
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             Her, who you swore was dirt beneath our feet,
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and I have nothing to protect myself from your almost
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certain scrutiny.
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Then- I awake and thank the lord that I might never even
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see you again.
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And then I curse Him for that same self reason.
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I might never see you again.
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