poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

sacred high heel pumps
Inuki

you told me:
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“Stars are always high,
 2
and let you look it up.
 3
But if you can shine,
 4
you can become a star.
 5
 
 
“And the light comes
 6
from replica designer handbags
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because everyone can have it.”
 8
 
 
you spoke effervescently
 9
of how your new models
 10
look maturate and beautiful.
 11
 
 
past the crinkled corners
 12
of my lips
 13
and the cracked contours
 14
of my Chanel glasses
 15
i strained to spy
 16
 
 
the faded frailty
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life had awarded me,
 18
a pride of branded purses
 19
piled high in protest.
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in ghastly, lidless dreams
 21
i see green
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exchanging hands
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without so much as
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a smile or a soft word.
 25
 
 
one day i'll be a faded smudge
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in your weary constellation.
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