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Random Poem:

Air
nenatraviesa

Why does life exist
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Beneath these walls of
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Self-destruction?
 3
The lives men lead
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So destined to be
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True, and yet
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Failure
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Creeps at every corner
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As self perfection
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Never ceases, never stops
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whispering caresses of doubts
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silky pleasures in our souls
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as we struggle
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and we kick
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fighting failure, doubt
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and then comes the air
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filling sweet air of
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forgiving virtue
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which once again
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revives us
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and we see our true selves
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alive, glistening from our triumphs and
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the glories which
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supercede our doubts
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and then we live again
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our do we die again?
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And this is death’s forgiveness
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A last chance in vain
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And a pittance for our sins
 29
 
 
 
 
Can it be true this lie
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Which grows within me?
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This doubt of life
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Truly and sincerely
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IS destiny a farce?
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A lie of sorts
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To keep our pain so sharp
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At bay from any remorse?
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Is it really worth my time
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To live and let live?
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To linger and live life?
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