poetry critical

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Random Poem:

what was it you said?
jeepster090

You are going to peel an orange free from pain siting in the frame, you’re insane,
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say to me, say it clear, say with fear, bring the world on top of me,
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kill me with life, revive me with passion,
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call me tomorrow
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seek to steal without the fear to kill,
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your conscience will forever haunt you,
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stay with me, stay inside me, feel inside me,
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play my song, play my inner scream,
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killers of racing screaming girls in dark nights thinking with drunken horny minds, take your spirit with you,
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walk into my dream, but dont steal me, feel me, caress me, drink me, kill me, develop my mind bring it out to show, people will see and become blind,
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my mind arrest simply in a exciting mess,
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stand on my eyes sink your toes in my eyes, massage my brain relieve me, relieve my tension relieve my pain,
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colonys filled up with screamers looking,
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staring inside your mind,
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seeping inside your desires, your hidden desires,
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sad monkeys in a cage, staring you until you cry, release them they will strike you with horror blood, intense movement killing your pride,
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why did i let them free?
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a sign rises upon me showing me the way to begin, begin. with your eyes shut, your mouth open,
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taste me, but you dont see me,
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spiders crawl inside your skull sending you to another world of crazy strangers,
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you are alone,
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dont be scared, feel your body feel yourself
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you are there nobody to keep you away from your own true sex maniacs,
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scared.
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are you scared? sink, sink into the dreams,
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dreams are no more than a world on you,
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every dream you conquer you seek to build,
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you are true not a failure in your ownself,
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ride in your home of sickness,
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she will kiss you, she will tell you
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she will make you, she will undertake you,
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dont freeze up now your life has just begun,
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tell your mother the coin has spun.
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