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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
Her body’s burning as she’s twisting
to the beat, beat, beat, b-beat, of the drums.
And her lollypop lips shimmer with sparkles,
from the lip-gloss that cost 9.99.
And she’ll shimmy her chest,
and wiggle her hips,
to her cherry laden drink,
and mystery man in the corner.
Bar room princess,
barstool; her throne,
Throwing back Shirley Temples, and unbuttoning her butterfly shirt.
Someone whispered to me, trying to be polite,
“Who is that girl with the candy-like lips?”
I laughed, and hooted as she did another twist of her hips.
“Check the men’s bathroom, 2nd stall to the last,
They say her name’s Lola, and if you want a good time
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