poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

A Train Ride Through The Mountains
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I.
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He kisses my neck
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and the sensation
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tingles,
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snakes down my leg.
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As the violent sounds of the train
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thunder outside the impregnable
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stillness of our compartment,
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we fog the window
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and link fingers.
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II.
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I awake with the pane of glass leaving
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its frigid imprint on my cheek.
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I close my eyes -
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“One ticket to Venice,”
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my voice echoed through
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the cavernous Charles de Gaulle Station.
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Swarms of parasites
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linked to one another
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violently bustled
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in a thundering sea around me.
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“Seulement une?”
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the gentle balding man
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behind the counter probed.
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I could feel my breathing in my ears,
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“Oui.”
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