poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

rabbit origami
DeformedLion

i am considering just lying on the couch and staring at the ceiling
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look at me, with the parting smile
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of a violin and the grace of a man
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i am violence tonight
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smirking at corners and
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lighting fires, there was a brace of birds
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or was it rabbits?  nestled amongst
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the praline limb of a debonair tree,
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ears flossing out the secrets of the wind,
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i guess they were hung there by a gentleman.
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a man with teeth, set in gentlemanly positions.
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and maybe i am too earnest when i cry,
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like when you were on the pedals of a steinway
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coming across the ruination of chopin
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and all i wanted was to slide my body
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from all of the coffins i
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dreamed of.
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  i thought it was nice that you played for mom and dad,
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  that the origami of your fingers was something
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  folding out from love letters
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  i had meant to write for you.
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was that something else worth considering?
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