poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Good-bye
lostkid

if my whole life is a failure
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i want this to remain true
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to remain whole untouched by the hands of time
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i want this to have only been yours and mine
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i want to always believe that one day i had you
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and you had me and we were
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ok we were whole
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because my life is begining and you
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cant imagine how much i am awaiting for the end
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for the end of the day
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for the end of my life
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for the end of my anguish and pain
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i can only stand so much longer and i feel
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so alone and my knees are becoming so weak
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my pain is eating me inside
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leaving only remains of what i one day was
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leaving only enough strengh to hold in a couple of more grasps
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to take in a little more shocks and
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a little more pain its been a while since the
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last time my smile was genuine its been a while
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and your wondering why?
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and the answers are out there but im so tired of looking i want to start saying good-bye...
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