poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Lie
dajk

I’ve fallen with the idea of love at first sight
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My want for love has made me fall in a pit of bullshit
 2
For every meal made
 3
I eat like a tiger that hadn’t eaten for days
 4
Exhaustion overcome me
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And I fall in midstream, drinking the water they hold out
 6
Like a camel I drink and drink
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I’ve fell in the whole witch I’ve created with my own hands
 8
They mimic the signal I put out
 9
I fall deep in the mist of all their lies
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Must be my fault, this the 3rd in a row that’s told me the story twice
 11
My heart crumples; sometimes I don’t even want to try
 12
The wrong men are falling at my feet almost everyday
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Is there a magnet that I’ve brought?
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Or is it that men don’t have any common sense, perhaps no morals
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My heart has no shield every time a man looks my way I feel like putting a dagger through his eyes
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I cringe, my heart can only hold so much
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How can they expect me to truly believe now?
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Shit all I see is red of the blood I feel like shedding right now
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