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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

To Be A Kid Again
lil_munchkin

Remember, when we use to run down the streets
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Dragging a doll or maybe a ball
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Remember when boys and girls had cooties
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And, you would run away has fast as you could.
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Everyone just played in one big group
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There was barely ever rumors.
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Invincible friends were there for you,
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When you were alone and sitting in the dark
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With your knees up to you chest and your eyes just tight to hold back the tears.
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Now your expected to take exams
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Be part of cliques
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Not run hand in hand.
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New rumors start every day
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There is this thing called love that no one seems to understand.
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Everyone seems to be pairing up.
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Everyone seems to act so grown up.
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Don't they remember how much fun it was to run through a sprinkler on a hot summer day?
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The feeling of the water going down your hot back
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The feeling of the coolness of the water taking over your body
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The feeling of the day just going on without thought for if you would be late
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The feeling of happiness spreading through.
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Don't they remember how to have fun?
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Don't they wish they could just play?
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I remember the hot summer days you wish would never end.
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Or, the days when you jumped and ran through the rain
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Oh, wait that was yesterday.
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It seems as though everyone is worried
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To high strung
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To remember just how to have FUN.
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To laugh, sing, and dance
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Making a fool of yourself
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But, not carrying well they all laugh.
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You didn't have worries
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You didn't have cares
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You didn't worry about bombs or war
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You didn't worry about anything
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But, playing in a turtle shaped sandbox even if you were alone.
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There was always Fred " The Invincible Man."
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Don't you wish you could just be a kid again?
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