poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

My Optics
peace

I wear glasses so I can see you but you can’t see me
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       and a greyhound can see 280 degrees round
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so no wonder he does all that head jiving and sometimes
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       it’s just as hard for me to focus—
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please take me to someone who knows something
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     about all of this, whether this donut is a donut
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plus its hole or whether the donut and the hole
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     are one unit
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                         then the hole says “Now I’m lost!”
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and of course you are, who can see you except me
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     after these purple leaves—exorcise me
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from this exercise, please
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oh help, oh hurry (!) the vision in my closed eyes is blurry:
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bodies unimportantly either aware or unaware or
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     alive or unalive coursing the sea
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of self-fulfilling prophesies; life is
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this sleep, and each catching what they’re doing
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     only as they do it, my hands
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so red and clean they exist
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                         in two worlds at once
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     I awake to hear the old man on my lucky penny screaming,
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“I don’t fit in this wretched circle!”
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                         Of course we don’t.
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