poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

If abuse is illness then our fathers made us sick.
starryme

Heavy hearted, I think of those heavy handed comments
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Blind-minded, they blind-sided your childhood
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when he left and moved to the west-coast
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when your small heart felt huge hurt
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leaving a hole your mother
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could never fill alone.
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Do they realize
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they never meant for it to end up this way?
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You were the one who wanted change
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And called for a generation to revolt
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to rectify the things that werent the
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way they were meant to be
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Now you serve up your sarcasm
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on plates with short order chefs
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delivered by big-bosomed babes
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who lack any genuine self-love
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Do you realize
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that you never meant to end up this way?
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I still feel great emotion when I think of you,
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and I wish that I could divorce myself
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from all care for you
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But when your name is mentioned, still, it surges up
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and it comes back with a vengence.
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For I desire a joy for you,
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so great that it hurts behind my eyes
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so great that it causes me to sit in silence
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because if this is how I feel, how must He feel?
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because if I express it out loud, I feel such shame.
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I'm not supposed to care about you anymore.
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And I realize
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that I wish it didn't end up this way.
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