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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

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Random Poem:

Maya's Flying Macaroni
Lexie

Page 1/2:
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Maya’s macaroni was boring.
 2
So boring, she could hear the cheese snoring!
 3
She thought a “Munch! Munch!”
 4
could wake up her lunch
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so she took a big bite
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/MUNCH
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and what a delight!
 8
 
 
Page 3/4:
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Maya liked very much what she ate.
 10
She looked down at the food on her plate.
 11
Oh My!  The cheese was all starting to stir!
 12
So with a “Gobble! Gobble!”
 13
the plate began to wobble and…
 14
/GOBBLE
 15
the macaroni was dancing for her!
 16
 
 
Page 5/6:
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Maya couldn’t contain her surprise.
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Her smile grew big and she widened her eyes.
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Well, what else could her macaroni do?
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/She took a “Chomp! Chomp!”
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and before long…
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CHOMP
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Page 7/8:
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the Macaroni jumped up…
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/and it FLEW!
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Page 9/10:
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Yes, some flew ‘round the kitchen,
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glided under her chair!
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/Some wiggled from her fingers
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and soared through the air!
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Page 11/12:
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Some spun and some dived -
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doing tricks, playing games!
 34
Some used Maya’s fork
 35
as a little airplane!
 36
 
 
Page 13/14:
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That macaroni was moving…
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that macaroni was busy!
 39
/It was so busy in fact,
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that it made Maya dizzy.
 41
 
 
Page 15/16:
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She cried:
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“Now look here you noodles!
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You’re now oodles of fun,
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But I am still hungry.
 46
Lunch has just begun!”/
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“So fly back to my plate!
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Dance into my tummy!
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Because if you don’t…
 50
I will have to tell Mummy.”
 51
 
 
Page 17/18:
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The macaroni all stopped
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and heard Maya’s request.
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They thought for a moment
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then did what was best. /
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Page 19/20:
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/They went back to her plate,
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some shuffled, some stomped.
 59
Then again Maya started to
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MUNCH! GOBBLE! and CHOMP!
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