poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Let's smash some taboos!
Linnac

Let's play Mummies and Daddies.
 1
We don't need a Mummy-
 2
she's never at home.
 3
Says she goes out for a drink
 4
even though the tap's full of water.
 5
 
 
You three can play the Daddies.
 6
Doesn't matter which one is real.
 7
Mummy says she'll tell me when I'm older
 8
(but I think she's still deciding).
 9
 
 
You can play the little brother
 10
that I look after
 11
like a big girl Mummy says.
 12
When I'm too busy,
 13
you can just pretend to watch the telly.
 14
 
 
You can play...
 15
I don't know if she's a half-sister
 16
or one of the Daddies' girlfriends.
 17
(She's very pretty.)
 18
 
 
Sorry, you'll have to keep
 19
changing who you are.
 20
We don't have enough people
 21
to play all the boys
 22
she plays with in her room.
 23
 
 
Oh! You can be mad old Granny!
 24
She's very funny,
 25
waving her vegetable peeler
 26
at the black, "terrorist" she calls him,
 27
across the street.
 28
 
 
But I don't want to play me
 29
'cause I don't like the games
 30
Uncle likes me to play
 31
and the ugly-looking photos he takes
 32
to remember the games by.
 33
 
 
Oo! Can I play Rover?
 34
I feel like pretending
 35
to be happy.
 36

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