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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|The Stranglehold Clock|
the shades of heart,
of hate lust greed... of intent
yet the way blood goes from red to blue,
pure sadness against midnight
where the day obtains a disguise,
a brand new identity
from what once was a peppermint tree
on a landscape of freedom,
with the ability to breath under water
finds itself a weeping willow
on a forever faith-ridden hatescape,
walking willfully to the bottom of the ocean...
there was once something beautiful
about dawn, about the latest nights
but when those fade
and each hour owns a new face,
the clock ticks,
the hands move,
we no longer know who is holding us...
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