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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|I Paint a Picture|
I close my eyes and paint a picture,
A sky of blue, fields of green,
Perfection, only a brush stroke away.
With each breath I take,
I can see the mountains, trees, A brook with clear glacier water,
Soft billowing clouds weightless aloft.
Moments pass into time as the beauty surrounds me,
I can hear the brook singing,
Feel a gentle breeze blowing across my face,
There is peace, and total tranquility.
I can see it, Touch and hear it,
Eyelids tightened harder,
Trying desperately to hold the image,
Knowing all too well, tomorrow my eyes will open,
The picture will be gone.
I live each day knowing,
When I lay down to rest,
Palette and brush will return to my hand,
And when I close my eyes,
I will paint a picture
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