poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

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Random Poem:

Reality
unknown

When I lye here alone in my bed,
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I realize something,
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There's something there,
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Inside of me that no can see,
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As me myself can only fee,
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When I try to explain,
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No one understands,
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Not even me,
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It's just that knowing that people have,
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The knowing of what's inside,
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And what it looks like,
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To me...it looks like...
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something unimaginable..a dream...a fantasy,
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Something that can't be described in words that anyone could ever think of,
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the feeling of being fulfilled, loved and hated, all at the same time,
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Not to myself, not to others, not to anything...
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Just the unknown feeling of everyting that surrounds you,
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the living, the dead, the yong, the old,
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When something happens...you know its going to happen,
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Not as planned...or just maybe as others wanted or needed it to be,
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Words that are said,
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Are best said in actions...the actions of feeling..
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The feeling that tells you now to act...and then waht to say...
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What you say...when you say it...
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You say it how it is...not how you wish it was...but how it is...
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To me...the only word everyone needs to  understand is...REALITY
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Whitney Wagner  
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April 27th 2006
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