poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

The Side Effects of Optimism
Resonanz

“From a distant mountaintop a wolf’s cry,
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Sounds are filling my cup half full.
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Only a pessimist can drain its bottom dry.”
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“Have you ordained the red in spite of the bull,
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and disregarded the smoke encompassing you?
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It’s ironic you forget to cough as it fills your lungs.
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Admire the sand that you’ll eventually chew.”
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“Listen, for I hear prophecy from far away tongues.
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Good news, all’s calm in the tumultuous distance.
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Please settle down, just swallow the story whole.
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Avoid the toes of the pacified if you must dance.”
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“Behold the fox approaches, in its deceptive role.
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Would you kiss its lips while the mouth is watering?
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Maybe that extra bit of saliva is a cautioning sign.”
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“Take note, for that black cat is happily purring.
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Kindling has replaced the grapes in our wine.
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So drink to a life that is still just as comfortable.“
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“Isn’t it odd people keep brushing ash from their hair,
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and still you believe the world outside remains stable?
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Aren’t you at all distressed by that corpse’s stare?”
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“Oh I’ll just call an optimist to explain all of this.
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Why should I fret while we sleep soundly at night?
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It’s easy to ignore the sirens, because nothing’s amiss.
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I’ll unplug these smoke detectors to soothe your fright.”
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“I suppose you’re probably right,
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but it feels like we're being overwhelmed by darkness,
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And regretfully I must confess,
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your alleged sunrise resembles an approaching headlight.”
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