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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
|On Reading "Astral Travel for Dummies"|
I shall change my name to Astral,
lie back upon my bed and wish
myself away, out of this body
that is my castle and my cage,
a silver string tied to my toe,
a trinket in a moment called Life.
I will chuckle as you freeze
when I ruffle your hair,
breathe on your neck and dust
your pictures as I pass, spying on
your life when I am not with you.
Tomorrow when we meet,
you will search my eyes for truth,
find only a trick of the light,
believing me when I say "It wasn't me."
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