poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

once again, i failed to see acceptance
unknown

Where has she gone? my father asked
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as he glanced over from the windsheild.
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I did not, could not, say a word in response.
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My fingers fumbled in my lap like two
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children who did what they knew they shouldn't of
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Until some hopeful curiousity led my eyes
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to his face. Only to find expected
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disappointment written clearly across.
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But his defiance was my own and I gave the
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answer I had some days ago.
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"She is still here, but you are always ignoring her."
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the look he gave me made my words turn
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to hidden tears. I could see the lingering faith he had that it was true as he
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imagined pigtails that once had been and my blue eyes filled with innocence.
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Alas, his lids fell down and he shook his
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head back to the road. As the
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disappointment hit him once again,
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held back tears spilled down my cheeks.
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but he was not there to see them.
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