poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

The beast you created
Codester

You are proud
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Because you created something just like you
 2
But father what happens when the thing
 3
You made,
 4
Turns on you.
 5
Everything you've know disappears.
 6
I am just like you in almost every way.
 7
But you didnt know,
 8
That my power struggle is not with others,
 9
Or with you.
 10
No its inside my own soul.
 11
You thought you had control.
 12
But not even beast's,
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Stay controled.
 14
 
 
 
 
You slowly realize,
 15
That Im making my own,
 16
Decisions and thoughts.
 17
What do you do now father?
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Like a fool you try mind games.
 19
They work for awhile till light shows through.
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I realize slowly but surely Im not you.
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I dont ever want to be you.
 22
I can make myself better.
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Better than you.
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Better than what I've become.
 25
I may be the beast you've created,
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But even beast's want,
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Freedom.
 28
 
 
You made one mistake in all your rage.
 29
You never thought I would learn,
 30
Of love,
 31
Of what you'd done,
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Or of the fact I could think for myself.
 33
Goodbye to you father,
 34
For tonight,
 35
The beast you created.
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Is bearing his fangs on you.
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Because I control my own soul.
 38
Not your stupid mistakes.
 39
Or your blood,
 40
No I control me,
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I make my decisions.
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And tonight you,
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Pay for you sins.
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Say goodnight,
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For you will not wake.
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Just know you created me,
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But I made me.
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With that I lay,
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Your name and anger to rest.
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