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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

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Random Poem:

Arise awake when you know
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When life reaches crossroads,
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when deeds of the past become old and plain,
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when life takes dull shades and sluggish modes
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then you know it is time to prove again.
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When life presents with no qualms,
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when the spirits are low and damp,
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and, when there is not enough to fill your palms,
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then you know its time to pick your lamp.
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When achieved heights melt away with time,
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when accolades become things of the past
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when gained merits wash away with time
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then you know it is time, again, to relive the past.
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When your life is not a trouble for your foes
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when your life is now a thing of mock and fun,
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when your life is now of success throes
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then you know life has to move and run.
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When hard to come are words of praise,
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then you know, you cannot let life slip beyond,
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when, with your every word eyebrows raise,
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then you know you cannot live, letting it slip beyond.
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When you know life could be different,
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then you know to tread different mosses.
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When you wish things be different,
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then you know to choose thorns not roses.
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When your stay is unwelcome and long,
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then you know it is time to fight another of fights.
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When, not are these heights you still have to throng,
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then you know it is time to scale another of heights.
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Now you know where the commons flood.
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Now you know this is not your path.
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Now you know to spill sweat and blood.
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Now you know to change your path.
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And, when you know...
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Arise awake and change your path.
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Change your path and,
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fear not the wailing fate,
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fear not the warning gong,
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fear not the flood and spate,
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And fear not a thing but right and wrong.
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Arise, awake and stand up tall,
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and the skies would kiss your hand.
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Arise, awake and run this land,
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and the earth would brace your fall.
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Arise, awake and baffle the foes.
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Arise, awake and befriend the seas.
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Arise, awake and bemuse the woes.
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Arise, awake and belittle the peaks.
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Arise, awake and stop not till the goal is reached.
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