poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

a wooden figure has the appearance of necessity in a coffee shop
MilkyDrops

in this place of rotten wood,
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different people come,
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and go.
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each one with,
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an apt expression,
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contemplating suicide in the spin of this world,
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heads tilted sideways,
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sucking in,
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the condensation from a coffee cup.
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they talk and complain,
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each and everyone,
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sharing sentences about the same pointless things,
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is this appearance of overtness,
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simply an act of over importance?
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or is it unintentional?
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i couldn't even repeat how many times,
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i see this scene on the littered streets,
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the square parks,
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the beaten bench.
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(on and on and on)
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in this place of rotten wood,
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there is an acute sense of attention to detail,
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will all these wasted minutes be collected? (and handed to us at the door)
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are we based on our merits?
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finish the bottle,
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then another,
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and pay attention to these conversations,
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competing; fighting for space.
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i'll be the same figure listening in the corner,
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just like yesterday and the days previous to this diluted one,
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slump lucked kamikazes,
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never building up the nerve,
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but there depart eventually,
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cupped in the palm of there own self-importance,
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dressed in finely tuned clothes,
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there words wont mean fuck all to anyone.
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THERE,
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                 gone.
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