poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Random Poem:

our bed (in progress)
colevaughn

You are building our bed.
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The wood, sitting on the kitchen floor for months
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is forging its way into furniture.
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Will you build this bed like you have built this love?
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Slow, steady, with bursts of passion?
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Worshipping every curve, angle, the grain of the wood
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with your eyes, your hands,
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taking time over it, afraid to make a mistake,
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to make a cut
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or bruise that perfect piece of hope.
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The blade rips, massages, chips away the straight backed form.
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Then, in front of us, our bed.
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