poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Not Yet Next Time
majan

Next time you push me away,
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I will let you
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throw me out of the door.
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I won't be bitter;
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I won't even beg
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for that standard package
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of a final breakfast in bed, tears
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and one last fvck (if making love
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would prove too much to bear).
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I'd double staple my tongue
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to the roof of my mouth;
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sew my lips bloody shut
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with my guitar's rusty strings
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so vile remarks can't come out.
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Words have always betrayed me
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whenever they escape, lacking,
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every time, any sense of propriety
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and respect for timing.
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But this is not the next time, yet,
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so expect a most worthwhile fight---
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absolutely everything I've got
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against everything you've logged
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and written down in your book-of-my-flaws.
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I'll seduce you to forgive me, and won't ask
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for a round of applause when you give in,  
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on this ungodly, indecorous hour,
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to my crudely honest manner of  kneeling.
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