poetry critical

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Random Poem:

//my friend's sister//
unknown

do you really
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want to use your allowance
 2
on that?
 3
her mom asked
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as the four of us
 5
left the grocery store.
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i want justin
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to like me,
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amanda said.
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she was seven
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and i was
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thirteen.
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she put four quarters
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in the machine
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twisted the
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metal handle
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and put a plastic egg
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in my hand.
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do you like it?
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she asked
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as her, jason
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and i
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rode home
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in the back seat.
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it's very nice
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i've never had
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silly putty before,
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i lied
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to make her feel good.
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you're my boyfriend now,
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she giggled
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and gave me
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an innocent hug.
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jason's family
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moved to arkansas
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pretty soon
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after that.
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amanda
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hadn't crossed
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my mind
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in the sixteen-years
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since.
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as she does
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tonight
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i'm thinking
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of that thing
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more important than
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money or sex
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a woman
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can give
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to a man
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and
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just how much
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of it
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she's probably
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used up.
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