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Random Poem:

Remember Me
kathyjp62

Remember Me
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If I were to leave this world today I'd want to be remembered its true,
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for going that extra mile just to show my love for you.
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I'd want for you to be proud of me and know I always tried,
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when you hurt I did too, your tears I also cried.
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I'd want you to be compassionate to never turn away,
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from someone who might need a hug or encouragement one day.
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I'd want you to know I'm sorry if I ever caused you pain,
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I hope you'd learn from my mistakes and
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forgive me just the same.
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There are no second chances when God
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says it's time to go,
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we only have today to let our feelings show.
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Remember this when you say your prayers and count your blessings tonight,
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and treasure every precious moment God gives you in this life.
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Written by Kathy J Parenteau
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copyright © Sept 2013
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