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Random Poem:

Ex Nihilo Ecclesiastes or The Truth Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
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Let us go then, you and I,
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Into the story of an equation;
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Caught like a patient etherized between
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One and infinity--
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Lost in chaos theories
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And holy trinitys.
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Let us go into
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The musty ancient passages of
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Lost eternal places;
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Understanding nothing as we
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Slip between the spaces.
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Yes, let us go down among them
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And beg the question buried deep
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Before surrender's sad retreat.
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Oh, do not say "Do tell; What is it?";
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Seek these grails as we revisit.
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In mainframes seraphs come and go
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Igniting spiritual vertigo.
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The yellow ethereal fog that rubs its visage into the deep
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The yellow pillar that guides us into the sea
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Spoke into eternity--
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Licked its tongue into the corners of modern understanding.
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Lingered amongst control groups.
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Let fall a plague of cancer amongst the survivors.
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Slipped out of our paradigm box,
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And seeing that all were distilled into confusion,
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Remained a mystery and fell asleep.
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And while it sleeps there will be time
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For the sulphurous smoke to penetrate our lungs,
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Pressing its back into the foundation of our homes;
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There will be time. There will be time
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To prepare a foolish password for the queries of conceit;
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There will be time to sow and a time to reap,
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And time for the simulacra and simulations
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That cling onto the edges of reality as we dream;
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Time for colors, symbols, paths,
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And time yet for one million revelations
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With ten thousand aberrations and false negations
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Before the taking of unholy wrath.
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In temples seraphs come and go
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Igniting spiritual vertigo.
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And indeed there will be time
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To wonder, "Do I care?" and, "Do I care?"
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Time to contrast and compare,
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With a maddening splinter of despair--
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(They will say: "How his hope has shrunk so small!")
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Mourning by rote, salvation mounted firmly to the wall,
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My perceptions sickly modest, inserted after Eden's fall--
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(They will say:  "How his faith has gotten small!")
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Do I care
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And continue to converse?
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In a sentence there is substance
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For diversions and excursions which a question will reverse.
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For I have known them all already, known them all:
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Have known the theories, posits, and the proofs,
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I have built a tower from these truths;
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I have heard its crumbling and a crashing fall
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Beneath the suppositions of my youth.
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     So how should I presume?
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And I have known the doors already, known them all--
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The doors that pin you in an undecided state,
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And when I am indecisive, faltering in this sin,
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When I am skinned and hideous in a crowded hall,
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Then how should I begin
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To beat my breast, to dramatize the pettiness of fate?
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      And how should I presume?
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And I have known the scars already, known them all--
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Scars that are innocent, wicked, just,
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[But in a mirror, drowned by ego's lust!]
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Is it the fear of wound's judgment
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That presses men to false assent?
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Scars wrapped inside a fable, or warped by wrinkle's crawl.
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     And should I then presume?
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     And how should I begin?
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                 . . . . . . .
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Shall I say, I have held the robes of Pharisees
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And watched the blood that drains away a life
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Of holy men in torn robes, pleading with the fatherless and the widows?. . .
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Would that I were the abandoned vessel,
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Settled in the dust of city streets.
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                  . . . . . . .
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  And the temporal intensity concedes,
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Sullen in soft surrender;
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Brittle, dessicated, ashen as its embers
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Scattered by winds, nonchalantly.
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Should I, after talks of love and hope and faith
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Dismiss, resent those questions we cannot escape?
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Though long we have sown, though long we have toiled,
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Though we tow the rocks to turn the soil
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Our labor is in vain-- for we are loathe
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To taste the flavor of our lives;
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A root's purpose does not satisfy
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As fruit, once chosen, now abstained.
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But would it have been worth it in the end
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After causal wine and casual luxury
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Among the rinds of consumed conformity
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Would it have been worth while
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To have strolled through our own garden with a smile,
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To have picked a portion of our fruit,
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To hold it high for all to see,
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To say "I am the chief of sinners,
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And this must cease;  Yes, I must decrease."
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If one, moving with God's speed
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     Should say "That is not it at all,
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     That is not what was meant at all."
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Or would it have been worth it in the end
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Would it have been worth while
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After the parlors, and the speeches and the latent treachery
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After the fireworks, after the silouhettes, after the
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