poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

I just want the sky to be
Cloudless

Last night as traffic thickened,
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tear drops swelled
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and I tried to convince myself that if I cried now,
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I'd kill us both.
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But wouldn't you know,
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I drove just fine
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in fact it was rather like
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driving in the rain.
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I didn't want to take my hands off the wheel,
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so the tears fell freely down
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my protruding collar bones
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and I pretended vagrants from Montreal might have liked
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to play in the puddle.
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You didn't even look at me
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but I knew you could hear it in my voice.
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I stripped myself of all my former
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    comforts.
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And now I'm just looking for something to remind me,
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           what my soul is for.
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So please let me know...
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  If I told you I thought love was the answer
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would you give me back my faith?
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