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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Our Final Destination Is With God
UHamilton

Our Final Destination Is With God
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By Uriah Lee Hamilton
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What purpose is there
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To live in darkness,
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To make one’s life dark
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Or to accept darkness?
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A life void of love
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Or generosity,
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A life of petty pursuits
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That fail to enrich another,
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This is darkness.
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A life that refuses
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To accept the love
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Of God or humans,
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This is the ultimate
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Extreme darkness.
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When a person finds love
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From the universe and for the universe,
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There is a light that radiates within
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For everyone else to see and feel;
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When a human being views a flower
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Or a sunrise, when he sees a small bird at dawn
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And feels the rush of spiritual promise that says
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The world is meaningful and beautiful
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And sometimes kind, this is a powerful light.
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Suffering and death are forms
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Of unavoidable darkness,
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An intense darkness that can crush a spirit
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That fails to contrast the sadness with the joy,
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The sorrow with the laughter,
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The goodbyes with the hellos in life.
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We must walk the line between darkness and light,
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Between loneliness and happiness
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Knowing our final destination is with God
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Which is the victory of light over the darkness.
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Divine Sunlight Rays of hope,
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Nurture the light within us to always increase
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And shine upon others with the promise
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That every struggle can be overcome
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And every battle against the heart or soul can be won,
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May we live to know love and to share love,
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May we be examples of the divine nature
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Which is ever to uplift with kindness
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And to bring the kingdom of heaven to earth.
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