poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Desire
unknown

You needn’t be old
 1
to have lived too long,
 2
nor need you be jaded
 3
to be old.
 4
Desire will weary you soon enough
 5
whether or not you hide in the idyll of the mind.
 6
 
 
Try walking under a full moon at eventide
 7
she will taunt you like silver lingerie:
 8
soon, you will be lusting over lunar luxuries
 9
whether or not you choose an idol of another kind.
 10
 
 
Her muzzle is warm and itchy
 11
like the muzzle of a horse,
 12
yet taunting as the muzzle of a gun.    
 13
 
 
Never mind that puckered lips play you like the flute:
 14
let the music slip you into it –
 15
A sensuous syringe
 16
she’ll drain you of daytime dross
 17
locked in mental monasteries.  
 18
 
 
Reach, my friend, through ruptured fantasies
 19
ravage victuals like Jerusalem
 20
and when your taste wane as those of Solomon
 21
with the ceasing of the wishes wafting from their yearning well,
 22
then sip turpentine like wine!
 23
Rape another’s mind and plagiarize their thoughts
 24
for your hair is starker than obscenities in synagogues:
 25
white as a baby’s sclera.  
 26
 
 
If you are so lucky as to revamp your ravenousness
 27
remember, there’s always your flesh.
 28
But most of all my friend,
 29
remember to forget that
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though yin may balance yang
 31
Yen is but herself.
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