poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Life or Death
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How is it possible to feel so much pain.
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The neadle is killing me,but i need it through my vain.
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You leave me naked,bound to your bone..
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i wonder if i`ll ever find my way back home.
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I wandered through the street looking for a hit
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then i met a guy who sold me a bit.
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Public toilets is nice to have,
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cuse nobody cares if you enter the " cave".
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There`s holes in my arms and scares for life
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maybe tonight i`ll die for the magical knife.
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I know i`ll get peace if i just do enough..
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but something inside me keeps me hanging tough.
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Heaven must be beautiful,i think i been there before
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im ready to go now..i cant do this life no more.
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Please God forgive me for giving up,but my body
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is tierd and screaming to stop.
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If there is a place called " paradise " on earth,
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can you take me there so i dont need anymore to hurt?.
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My feet is swollow,by back is in pain...my head is spinning,but i realy need that neadle through my vain.
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I cant go on all by my self,so God if you see me please dont send me to hell!
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Hell is here..the life i chose..
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heaven or paradise ,if you take me there..i guess pain will finaly close.
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