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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
Tepid rays of pale daybreak
cast a soft shadow of your profile
on the bedroom wall at your side.
I smile at the sight of you,
your much-loved lips
parted in sleep,
and imagine you borne aloft upon a cloud of dreams
somewhere far away, yet still beside me.
I linger in your warmth a moment longer,
my head on your chest,
drinking in the scent of your skin.
Reluctantly I tear my body and eyes away,
but not before one final glance imprints anew
your beloved face upon my heart and memory.
Until the evening, then, my love.
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