poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Farewell...
Raizenne

I saw a picture of you.
 1
Wondering how my eyes became full.  
 2
I tried to get to know you,
 3
Feeling like I was a fool.
 4
Hoping to get as close as can be,
 5
Like a jolly calling sib.
 6
 
 
Everyone yearns for you,
 7
That they tried so hard to be with you.
 8
To have their body pressed against yours,
 9
The irrespective deeds has no remorse.
 10
Sadness dripped, understanding is so deep,
 11
Hoping that you will somehow peep.
 12
 
 
Once I felt to be in a fame,
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Though I only got your name,
 14
And for you its just a game.
 15
There is a strange force,
 16
That provides the idea before.
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Of seeing you up close,
 18
But the wind blows...
 19
 
 
One day,you met someone,
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Whom you think could be the one.
 21
You love him, as I was told,
 22
A jested grim, I did retort.
 23
Desperate to find a shim,
 24
For my shandy like whim.
 25
 
 
I know I won't hold you for long,
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Like I won't get a hold of your tong.
 27
Though its not your body that served as the magnet,
 28
It's the oddy "you" that serves as a net.
 29
Did I just pity you?
 30
Nah, for its you who made your cue...
 31
 
 
How I wish I am on his shoe,
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But that idea I eventually shoo.
 33
Impossible but it did made a toll,
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Perhaps I just want to have it all.
 35
Forget it like I will never recall,
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Your image will now take the curtain call.
 37

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