poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Poem: [I used to go to bars...]
chrisgubbrud

I used to go to bars where I knew you would be
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Even though we had never spoken, and knew we never would.
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You were habitual like all people are I suppose,
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Sitting at the same table, drinking the same drink,
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And smoking cigarettes sporadically
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The ashes piling up faster than the glasses, your ashtray
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Resembling a crematorium for vices.
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I knew a conversation in close context would reveal
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A combination of smoke and vodka on your breath
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All my senses taking in your revelations.  
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The way your lips formed to make the words
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The gentle contact of your tongue inside your mouth
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Providing enunciation, and a softness I was begging for.
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The feel of your hand on my leg, my arm slinking around you
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To draw you in closer still, my stomach fluttering, nervous.
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The taste of your mouth, the presentation of your habits,
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Thick and holding steady on my palette.
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Sitting from afar I used to imagine all of these things
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And how smoking used to disgust me, but now,
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Smoke billowing from your mouth
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I am hypnotized at the ghost shapes leaking towards the ceiling.  
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To my drunken, half closed eyes and aching heart
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Alone at the far side of this dark saloon they become smoke signals
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Only I can read, your tongue twisting to send me sweet nothings
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Holding them in my mind long after they have seeped into
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The tiles on the ceiling, composing hieroglyphs of our secret love
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For scientists to study in the years to come.
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