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Random Poem:

Song Of Childhood
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When the dream is over
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please don't cry
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I'm not saying good-bye
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we have something good between us
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something ...we could never find again,
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but the dream is over
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here the end of the play
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go and find another love
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you will be better that way
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I'm not talking about leaving you behind
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or I ganna find ...someone new
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the words can't get out of my mouth,
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but you mast know the true...
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I don't have the heart-
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who can really love you
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me life... not the dream
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that I can share with you
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oh... how long it will take
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before you see
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that you have spending your life
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try to minding the brooking's in me
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I'm shadows of man
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and I want you; free
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please..
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don't waste your feelings on me
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now why you cry?
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you don't know how it feel like
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to see a tear in your eyes
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if just could know, how much my pain
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I thought this heart
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would never feel again
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I thought that no one can
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brake a broking heart
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just do what you have to do
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go find someone to love,
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who can really love you to
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just go on your way...
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and don't look back at me
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just leave, don't worry ...
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I will be alright
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and trust me you will be fine
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you will find ..
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all the love that you felt for me
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waiting in someone, someplace you will be,
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and you will live your life ,happy and free
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open your eyes and you will see..
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that is you destiny
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and if you ...ever heard my name
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or glans me ,in the face of your child
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you will think of me and smile
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remembering the way we used to be
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so please go ..
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and take with only the good memory
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and I will be always thankful
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for all the love that you gave for me
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