poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

A Missing Piece
opal

She imagined their life together
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as a 4,000 piece cardboard jigsaw:
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A dissected map in which they walked, sat, kissed.
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His dark hued shapes gave substance to her shadow;
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when he talked, she found the smooth edges
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of her voice; when he joked she found the shades
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of her smile and when he cooked,
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she found irregular edges of appetite
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smoothed.
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She was surprised how much
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she embraced puzzling and sometimes sat
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late into the night to discover an interlocking
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match, but there was always a piece missing.
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She never felt able to cry out, triumphant,
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in the small hours ‘I’ve done it.’
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and as she continued night after night,
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a third figure appeared amongst fragmented images,
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often just a glimpse of fleeting dress or hair or flesh
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then gradually more substantial: a hazel eye,
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a knowing look, the sensuous curve of a lip.
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One night she realised there was only
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one scene of their puzzle in  which she still played
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a part.
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A forlorn figure who watched him walk away
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and then she knew why difficult jigsaws have
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no guide picture on the box. It is so their true subject
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can remain a mystery until final shapes
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are fitted
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into
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place.
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