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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Self Medicated Cry For Help
vegasgemini

I’m not so much angry as I am tired,
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I’ve calmed down a bit now, so don’t get me wired.
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OK, we’ll talk about it, but let’s have a drink,
 3
I’ll recite comical words, but I refuse to think.
 4
 
 
This tiny  martini is gone in one sip;
 5
Pour me another and we’ll shoot from the hip!
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Just one glass of wine, and I won’t hold back,
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Doesn’t someone have a bowl to pack?
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While hashing this out, we’ll have a few tokes,
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I won’t be a buzz kill, I’ll make a few jokes.
 10
 
 
We’ll get off the subject, points will be lost;
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The THC smoke will cloud all our thoughts.
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Perhaps the booze will make me a bit brave,
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And you’ll catch a glimpse of a soul to be saved.
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But the second I realize that this has occurred,
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I’ll question my judgment, the truths you have heard…
 16
 
 
I’ll make you laugh and pour you a shot,
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No need to bug you with problems I’ve got.
 18
 
 
C’mon sit back down, what’s your big hurry?
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You got to make curfew??? Will Mom start to worry???
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What’s so important you just HAVE to go?
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Look; here’s a C-Note; score us some blow.
 22
 
 
Call up your boy; I’ll get you the phone.
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Let’s party tonight; don’t leave me alone.
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Just stay here with me the rest of the night,
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I’m having some issues, I don’t feel quite right;
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It’s a downward spiral of shame and self-doubt
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And no drug or drink drowns those demons out.
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But, oh, how I’ll try; I’ll do more and more;
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Perhaps going further than I have times before.
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This time the pain may just be too great,
 31
And this time I may buckle under the weight.
 32
 
 
It’s honestly not that I don’t want to live,
 33
It’s just that I question what I have left to give.
 34
 
 
Like I said, I’m tired, tired of playing this game,
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For disappointing outcomes that are always the same.
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I’m done; game over—and rather than deal,
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I want to go numb; this pain is surreal.
 38
 
 
So please, stay with me, do me this favor,
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Hold me tonight and I’ll pay you back later.
 40
 
 
The jokes are all gone now, I’m starting to cry,
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Sassy remarks washed away by tears from my eyes.
 42
 
 
If needed, I’ll even beg for your pity;
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Don’t leave me alone when I’m feeling this shitty.
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Pretend that you care for a little while now,
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And I’ll get it together tomorrow somehow.
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But tonight I’m going to need some help;
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Stick around, have a beer, save me from myself.
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