poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

An affinity with death
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An affinity with death
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They say that I possess
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I take the songs that widows wrote
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And with them take their breaths.
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White lips caress the bitter ends of legacies that sorrow feign
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This needle injects this acrid drug that helps to cease the pain.
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The babies cry in silent graves reaching for their mother’s wake
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As I mock the mourning mass whose pieties they fake
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They say this muse that I abuse is violent to the core
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Yet they pretend like it’s the end as they repent to the sullied whore
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That is the bread and is the life of fidelity paid at a price
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Prisoners of their own device
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The sanctity is breached in a world with no cost
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No one cares for the deeds we must heed to resurrect the lost
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This knife abides to my glorious prize of relief beyond the grave
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I adhere to nothing and see the black as this low begins to cave
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One more hit and this is it my morose end to a realm within
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Where the widows writhe and babies cry in the place where I’ll begin.
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