poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Oregon Lodge
devilsbelboy

She grew up in a moutain home, a fireplace that breathed dragons, spirits, with the aid of her daddy's wizard's hat
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He kept her away from public school, and decided to educate her right there on his warm lap
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O the log burns right in your fireplace
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I'm drunk in Cave Junction baby
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An' I only want your kiss
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You can live in Montrose an' Tujunga
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but you will always long for that mountain mist
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Fireplace burns to a young girl's green eyes
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The home burns with a celtic cross
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O girl, how I only wish that you were mine
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Her mama waited tables but hoped to be an' editor
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Movies, whatever, music videos and hippie stock
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Nature shows
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Dawn learned to hang out on the beach, sand so much different than mountian dirt, moving through her hands so slow
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O the dance at Starlight goes so slow
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I'm drunk in the fish bowl searching for my girl
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I only want her kiss
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I could met her in her Tujunga backhouse
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that might bring me to that mountain's mist
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Fireplace burning for her green eyes
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Her home, burning with her celtic cross
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O girl, how I only wish that you were mine
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