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Poetry Critical 2.0
Hey guys, Donald here.
In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.
But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?
Development updates from Twitter:
Knowing severs the spirit, nauseates-
It weighs down the heart, unbearable heft.
Skewed viewpoint opined unthinking relates;
Awareness now there is nothingness left.
Bereft, depressed, a pain too deep for tears,
All attempts to forget this agony
Fail--- for memory never disappears.
Knife plunges, twists, deadens being of me.
Will anguish subside eventually?
At least lessen enough to become numb?
Traverse this abyss listless mentally;
Seeking serenity, even a crumb.
Muttering muddle on with the charade;
Blade shimmies stings stabs in back of betrayed.
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