poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

Dawn
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The early morning’s chilly breeze
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Whistles through the naked trees
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The soft dew fallen in my hair –
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A beaded crown I now do wear.
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Then, turning to the sun’s first light
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I bear witness to a wondrous sight –
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A perfect circle, bright and fair –
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So common and yet still so rare.
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Around and round the spinning starts –
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Lifting soul and warming heart.
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Spinning so the sun might see
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It’s own light enter into me.
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The spinning stops, the waltzing ceases
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And I am looking for the pieces
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Of my life, before the dawn –
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The light that made the world reborn.
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I pause to catch my breath and then
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I find the sun’s moved on again.
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My brief chase is to no avail –
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The sun departs this golden vale
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And the world is as it was before.
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Carry on, I must! Yet evermore
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I remain. Sadly though, it travels far
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That ever-brilliant, distant star.
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The darkness growing round-about
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Steals colour, and I come to doubt
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How again the sun could shine?
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Into the dark abyss of mine…
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But before the long, cold night is done
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I turn, surprised to greet the sun.
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Not spreading light across the land,
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But clasping my big clumsy hand.
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