poetry critical

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

In Review
Dom

First there was New York City,
 1
Shining green with Christmas lights.
 2
Icy hands,
 3
Coat pocket,
 4
A heating lamp,
 5
A tall garage.
 6
Sneaking kisses behind his back.
 7
 
 
They published your brochure!
 8
 
 
Month one:
 9
With a secret look
 10
The words you couldn’t say.
 11
 
 
You earned your wings, I cried.
 12
 
 
Month two:
 13
Skipping school
 14
To watch the fillies play.
 15
They kicked and you got scared.
 16
 
 
You remember the green picnic table, don’t you?
 17
 
 
Month three,
 18
I think was flowers
 19
And a bunny in a cage.
 20
 
 
His identity crisis was your fault.
 21
 
 
Four...
 22
Ice cream on the tailgate.
 23
It was still too cold...
 24
 
 
My scrap book holds your name.
 25
 
 
Month five:
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Naked in the shower.
 27
Hot bodies pressed together
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To fight off the cold of the falling water.
 29
We danced the night before.
 30
 
 
I know you feel guilty reading this.
 31
 
 
The sixth
 32
We celebrate.
 33
They sabotaged your car.
 34
 
 
How about playing darts?
 35
 
 
Month seven:
 36
You grew older, but
 37
The electricity didn’t stop.
 38
 
 
I was looking over your shoulder while you dreamed.
 39
 
 
Eight
 40
You moved me out.
 41
A silent car ride home;
 42
The three of you cried.
 43
 
 
That was the end wasn’t it?
 44
 
 
Month nine:
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It came too soon
 46
I loved it all the same.
 47
Not a romantic setting
 48
But still an important date.
 49
 
 
Tell your sister I say happy birthday
 50
 
 
Month ten:
 51
My best year yet.
 52
Took pictures in your kitchen
 53
With an orange covered knife.
 54
 
 
More pictures I won’t forget...
 55
 
 
Eleven
 56
Was my turn.
 57
More friends than I could count.
 58
It was quick but I still held it.
 59
You were sorry,
 60
I was not.
 61
 
 
Your mom makes the greatest cakes.
 62
 
 
Month Twelve:
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Our last one.
 64
Not such a permanent point
 65
I guess he was wrong
 66
 
 
You planned it didn’t you?
 67
 
 
There was an icy ending.
 68
The trees they screamed aloud,
 69
There were painful bitter lamp lights,
 70
Your neighbors heard me cry.
 71
 
 
Do you regret that last goodbye?
 72

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