poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Poetry Critical 2.0

Hey guys, Donald here.

In a few weeks, this site will be 9 years old. 9 years! And I still know some of the earliest submissions by heart.

But, boy. That’s like 102 in web-years. So it’s time for something new. I’m building that something now with my nights-and-weekend minutes (and plenty of coffee). Buy me a cup?

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Random Poem:

life
fractalsky

i eat because i'm unhappy. i'm unhappy because i eat.
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i lie because i want you to like me. you like me for my lies. you like a lie.
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i cry because i'm laughing. i laugh when i should cry.
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i feel safe because i'm homeless. i don't feel safe in my home. the world is my home.
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i can't look you in the eye because i know what i will see. i can't look myself in the eye because i don't.
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i put off what i should and do what i shouldn't. i move when i should stay still. and vice versa.
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i speak when i should be silent. i let my silence speak. i lend my voice to actions.
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i brandish the pen and write by the sword. i cut with my tongue and carve with my words.
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i am a victim of my own conscience. i am a victim of unconsciousness.
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i stay when i should go. i return where i am not wanted.
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i defy logic and convention. i am an individual.
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i am one of a crowd. i am one with the crowd.
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i am part of many and they are part of me.
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i live life with no regrets. i take each day as it comes. i live life free, taking anything and everything i can get from it, with abandon and according to my own law. i live life like i want to die.
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i write what i can't say. i say what can't be written. i write everything.
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i think therefore i am. i am therefore i think. i think i am at least.
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i began with nothing. i gain everything, then lose it again. i repeat.
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i look at the world and see corruption.
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i look at myself and see the same.
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i look at the world and see beauty.
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i look at myself and see the same.
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i look.
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i see everything. i blink. i see nothing.
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